This is a very interesting notice about a hurricane.The hurricane named ike passed from the atlantic ocean and up to united states.The hurricane was terrible at the begining but then it transformed only in a tropical storm.Most of the hurricane passed by houston.Houston was flooded and very destroyed, but the people are okey with that so they build again their houses.
One time i was in a hurricane in can cún the name of the hurricane was katrina it was very scary becaause i was in the sea but in the horizon was very dark so we run inside the hotel and the building started to sway but we stayed calm and we were saved.
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Dear nico-poker:
Your text was good but... you had some capitalization errors.
Your text is good and describes the hurrican. Put only a little bit more of information.
☺YukiTa☺
The article is measing a little of information.
The second part I dont understand.That happen to you?
Hi niko-triko.Niko,I agree with yuka frita(hahaha luci..) your have some capitalization errors, you should correct them..
♥Ma-K ♥
Nico you can add more ininformation and correct some errors.
Your article is very interesting , you can complete it al little bit .
Be careful with spelling mistakes and capitalization. I LIke it alot
cancun is not separated
The article is coherent and complete,you had spelling mistakes.
nicolas gonzales:
it is mising information it have capitalizations errors and some spellings mistakes.
bye
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